You have completed an outline and have written your first draft. While it’s a lot of work and something to take pride in, you are not done yet. Usually, there are areas to be fixed, or “revised,” and general polishing is needed. Join Director of Writing Advising Jennifer Wyatt-Speegle, Associate Director of Advising Dr. Susan Choo, and Writing Advisor Loren Cressler as they help you put the finishing touches on your personal statement. In this workshop you will learn:
• What steps to take to get your final draft.
• How to write a compelling introduction.
• Why transitions are so important, and how to implement those transitions.
• What makes a great conclusion

Jennifer has over 15 years of experience working in education, including teaching writing and research courses at UC San Diego, counseling students on college admissions, supporting students in special education, and developing ELA curriculum for StudySync. Currently, she leads the writing advising and college advising teams at MedSchoolCoach.

Dr. Choo completed her pre-med education at UC Berkeley and obtained her medical degree from UC San Diego. She is a board-certified pediatrician and has served on the admissions committee, reviewed applications, and worked with UC Irvine to teach and prepare students for the application process.